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Thursday, February 2, 2012

Fic: Silent Vipers -Prologue

A pair of reddish ears patched with black flicked around, trying to locate the source of the alarmed yelps. Oh no, she thought, and quickly tried to read her younger brother’s thoughts. They were frantic, worried, and deadly. He was scared he was going to die.

She quickly decided to focus on the mental images, and preview her brother’s sight. She saw flaming hoods coming out of the necks of the invaders. “Dre’sk,” she muttered softly. “How dare those yrong capture R’qu.”

She had to do something, and quick. The conquerors might just decide to prick her brother’s pure white neck with ivory fangs, brimmed with venom. He was going to die…

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So, what do you guys think? This is just the prologue; the actual story is going to start before this so you actually know what is going on, who these people are, and learn a little bit about their culture. And you'll learn the protagonist's name...

I'm trying to decide if I should keep writing from third person POV or if I should switch to first person. Which one would you people prefer to read? :)

4 comments:

  1. MUST. FORCE. SELF. TO GIVE. FEEDBACK. XD

    I LOVE the name! And the story is so ominous and foreign. I like it. :)

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    1. Thanks Lauren :). The first chapter should be uploaded within the upcoming week :).

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  2. Dude, evil vampire like snake people... AWESOME!
    It's different... I like it. :D Oh crap, I'm using ellipses. :-0

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    1. I wasn't intending to have them be like vampires. -.-

      It's intended to be different. I don't want to do something that's been done a zillion different times. *coughcrappyvampirelovestoriescough*

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